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While your dialogue does seem scripted, it really helps that the text appeared as the lines were read. It might have helped if the ‘actors’ could really verbally ‘act’ out the lines. But a good effort.
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While your dialogue does seem scripted, it really helps that the text appeared as the lines were read. It might have helped if the ‘actors’ could really verbally ‘act’ out the lines. But a good effort.